Learning has always been something that I’ve enjoyed, so
it’s not far-fetched to say that I’ve gained a significant amount of knowledge
within the short 3 weeks we’ve been in class. I’ll admit that some of it has
been a refresher of concepts and ideas that I’ve already come in contact with,
but there are still things that I’ve picked up.
Most recently, I’ve discovered that if the subject is
right I enjoy academic reading. Our article on Dora is something that I’ve
enjoyed picking apart as I’ve gone through it. ITS CONTENTS HAVE GRASPED MY
MIND IN A WAY THAT I HAVEN’T EXPERIENCED PREVIOUSLY WHILE READING A
NON-FICTIONAL TEXT. Usually I find myself dozing off while reading text book
type literature because it just couldn’t hold my interest. I’m glad to have
learned that grammar actually captures my attention and causes me to want to
read more.
I HAD NEVER KNOWN THE PROCESS YOUNG CHILDREN (AND SOME
ADULTS) GO THROUGH WHILE LEARNING TO WRITE; TAKING ON A GRUELING PROCESS THAT
WILL ONE DAY, AFTER MANY ATTEMPTS, FAILURES, AND SUCCESSES, BECOME THEIRS. I
HAD NEVER READ ABOUT A CHILD WHOSE EXPERIENCE DREW ME IN, REGARDLESS OF BEING A
FICTIONAL STUDENT BROUGHT TO LIFE THROUGH THE CONGLOMERATION OF MANY DIFFERENT
CHILDREN, AND HELP ME THINK IN MANY NEW AND DIFFERENT WAYS ABOUT TEACHING AND
THE LEARNING PROCESS. I don’t personally remember my own learning process when
discovering the function of periods and word separation, but I’m hopeful that
my own teacher was as helpful as the one Dora had the pleasure of studying
under.
I’VE COME TO REALIZE THAT MY OWN INTERPRETATION OF TEXT
AND HOW IT SHOULD BE PUNCTUATED CAN BE COMPLETELY DIFFERENT THAN YOURS. Thanks
to Cordeiro, I can feel better about the freedom I have with my writing because
“effective punctuation, like effective writing, is the result of good judgment,
not of one’s ability to follow so-called rules of good punctuation or writing”
(111-112). AS A STUDENT, I’VE ALWAYS BEEN FAIRLY LIBERAL WITH MY PUNCTUATION,
USUALLY GOING BY GUT INSTINCT FOR PLACEMENT INSTEAD OF WHERE A RULE DICTATES I
SHOULD PLACE A COMMA OR PERIOD; AS A TEACHER, I WILL BE ABLE TO ALLOW MY
STUDENTS THE SAME PRIVILEGE. They’ll be able to explore and develop their own
knowledge and writing style, and feel good about their progress knowing they’re
allowed to make mistakes or take creative liberties.
I am hopeful that I will continue to build knowledge in
this class, developing a solid approach to handling grammatical situations with
my future students, and learn more about the process of development in writing.
I also hope that eventually it won’t take me hours on end to figure out a way
to incorporate our patterns of the week. Writers block certainly set in this
time. Haha.
COMMENTER: What are your thoughts on punctuation? Do you
usually try to follow the rules or your instincts? Do you typically like a lot
of punctuation or as little as possible? Are you scared of lengthy sentences
with multiple clauses? Feel free to answer any, all, or none of these. Just
figured I’d give you a good topic to comment about. =)
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ReplyDeletePersonally I write punctuation as I go along and revise, take out, and add more on my read through. On the revise side I make sure the sentences I write sound how I intended them to, on the take out part I remove punctuation that is clunky or may mislead a reader from the voice I wanted, and on the addition part I like to add in order to clarify points and over tones I want to use in my paper.
ReplyDeleteWhen it comes to sentences, I usually write the idea I have in mind out with very little regard to the length it may produce. If I come up with a sentence that seems to run on far too long I do like to try and simplify my idea or punctuate it in a way where my meaning still sticks, but also allows the reader a slight rest without breaking grammar rules. Aren't I nice? ^^ Maybe next time you'll ask for comments on YOUR writing~~
Haha. Nate, we commented on each other's blogs. And just to clarify, I did say that you did not have to answer any of the questions I asked. I was just trying to break the ice for my commenter. You are always free to talk about whatever you want! =)
DeleteJust a stylistic consideration, really, about your pattern of the week: That first sentence is much longer than the second. As you'll notice, our pattern has a shorter first sentence, which makes the parallel wording at the opening phrases stand out. Personally, I would try to make them about the same length, to point to the parallel wording. Then again, maybe Cordeira would have, too: remember we changed the punctuation to a semicolon.
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