Here's a little something I had to write up for my Mythology class this semester: The take-home portion of my midterm! Hooray!
KEY
Participles
Absolutes
Appositives
Adjectives
Being an Atheist, I often dismiss
the fact that faith can be a real and powerful thing to individuals. My “lack
of faith” tends to render me blind to the complexities of beliefs and how
important they can be to an individual’s life. During the course thus far, I
have come to realize that faith in a creator, or creators, is an important and
everyday aspect to the lives and cultures of the characters and people in our
texts—both the civilizations of the time, and the authors who wrote down their
most important words. These belief systems provided them with many answers, helpful, familiar, and important, to bring understanding to the world around them and a sense of unity as a
community or group (something that can still be seen within our society today),
and, through the fashioning of intricate stories, passed on knowledge from one
generation to the next as a source of education about both their faith and their
world.
The idea of faith seemed to rule the
lives of these people and cultures to an extent that, when they sought out
knowledge to answer the unknown, they looked toward their belief systems for an
explanation. This supernatural search for an answer can be found most
prominently within the texts that we read earlier on in the semester—the Native
American creation myths and genesis. Focusing on the answer to a question that
describes the origins of not only people but the world itself, could be labeled
the most popular unknown both to ancient civilizations and current day
religious types and scientists. Each story has a common element: a creator. Be
it a god, goddess, supernatural being or creature, or even a seemingly
scientific event, each group depended (and still depends) heavily on their
belief systems or faith to answer this question.
To begin with the most well-known
version of creation, our own Christian views, we are presented with a singular
God that “created the heaven and the earth”—night and day, earth, water and
sky, plants, creatures of the sea, air and land, and lastly humans (Genesis 1).
The Shakti creation myth we read is a good compliment to the Christian view
through the use of a single being creating everything, but they choose a woman
instead of as “man”. Their creator is “she who holds the Universe in her womb,
/ source of all creative energies, / Maha Devi who conceives / and bears and
nourishes / all that exists” (Shakti 487). Each of these stories also has a strong
sense of a reward system. Obeying or pleasing these beings brings about good
fortune to the worshipers, which could provide success in both life and death,
and help create a strong set of rules and/or morals for the community.
(Skipping ahead a bit so you don't have to read a novel...)
What all of these creation stories
have in common is the deep rooted dependence on their faith. They used familiar
and comfortable ideas to explain the unknown and help bring order to chaos, their community being the source of inspiration for the familiar.
These stories gave them something to bind them together as a community, and
provided a way to pass this knowledge on to future generations. The same still
holds true today. Personally, my lack of faith is defined by my beliefs. I do
not believe in a God, but I do believe in other things such as science and
karma.
Post Script: Well, I apparently love appositives. Haha. I'm not surprised. They seem to have a little more creative give when I'm writing. Perhaps a little more creative freedom. Anyway, let me know if I've gotten anything wrong! It's a lot harder for me to spot these things when I'm not writing the sentences right then and there.
hmmm... did you brush these in, or did you find them in your original paper, as is? Just wondering, mainly because this piece doesn't sound like you!
ReplyDelete"During..." is actually a prepositional phrase, right?
Also, notice that when you use more than two ADJECTIVES OUT OF ORDER, commas can get in the way.
p.s. superb response you gave this week. Thank you!
I don't think the second comma on your first participle is required. I'm thinking it might be possible assuming you want some very extra emphasis, but reads fine without. The other thing I noticed was the first group of adjectives and I almost wonder if listing them might even call for a colon instead of commas all around. I made a sort of experimental sentence on my blog this week.. your reminded me of mine.
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